{"id":1849,"date":"2015-08-09T15:38:40","date_gmt":"2015-08-09T15:38:40","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/thunderofwade.com\/blog\/?p=1849"},"modified":"2015-08-09T15:38:40","modified_gmt":"2015-08-09T15:38:40","slug":"butterflies-editing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/thunderofwade.com\/blog\/2015\/08\/09\/butterflies-editing\/","title":{"rendered":"butterflies, editing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Visiting my folks this weekend for my youngest niece&#8217;s 3rd birthday. \u00a0I drove down to my parent&#8217;s new house on Saturday morning and got the grand tour. \u00a0It&#8217;s nice &#8211; one story with plenty of storage and a huge garage. \u00a0They have good neighbors and seem pretty happy here.<\/p>\n<p>We headed over to my sister&#8217;s after lunch and helped with the setup for the party. \u00a0The theme was butterflies so I learned how to make those out of paper and then taught Dad so we could help decorate.<\/p>\n<p>The birthday girl was super excited \u00a0&#8211; even more so when she got a little frosting in her. \u00a0\ud83d\ude42 \u00a0 The kids did some crafts and played outside before it was time to head to dinner. Before we left, she was fussing a bit about getting her hair fixed into pigtails &#8211; or &#8220;birdy hair&#8221; as she calls it. \u00a0 I sat down on the floor with her and suggested that her mom would fix my hair the same way after she was done.<\/p>\n<p>My niece looked at me incredulously and told me &#8211; in no uncertain terms &#8211; that I did not have enough hair for birdy hair. \u00a0We bantered back and forth a bit while she was getting her own hair done and she was soon laughing again at how silly &#8220;uncle&#8221; is.<\/p>\n<p>Dinner was good and we said our goodbyes. \u00a0I stayed the night at my folk&#8217;s new house and I&#8217;m doing a little reading and writing this morning while they are at church.<\/p>\n<p>The book I&#8217;m reading is an adaptation of a video game. \u00a0It&#8217;s always a little interesting to read how an author can try to expand or create a story from a standard slog through a dungeon, but it&#8217;s a fun read and not too challenging. \u00a0Though it could have done with a better editor &#8211; the typos and grammar are a bit distracting.<\/p>\n<p>The characters in the game \u00a0&#8211; Gauntlet &#8211; are healed from their injuries by eating. \u00a0When a character is near death, a voice will intone &#8220;<strong>Wizard needs food badly!<\/strong>&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>And for some insane reason, the author choose to force <em>that<\/em> line &#8211; in the most obvious and blatant way possible &#8211; into the story. \u00a0I&#8217;ve read this book before and I&#8217;m always cranky when I get to that one stupid section.<\/p>\n<p>So, today, I skimmed back through the book to find that line and with a black marker, I struck the line from the text.<\/p>\n<p>Not something I did lightly, but with grim determination and certainty of purpose. \u00a0I think the book is better for it.<\/p>\n<p>Think it&#8217;s time for a snack and some sitting outside. \u00a0Feeling&#8230;quiet today. \u00a0And I think I needed it &#8211; the last couple of weeks have been rough.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Visiting my folks this weekend for my youngest niece&#8217;s 3rd birthday. \u00a0I drove down to my parent&#8217;s new house on Saturday morning and got the grand tour. \u00a0It&#8217;s nice &#8211; one story with plenty of storage and a huge garage. \u00a0They have good neighbors and seem pretty happy here. 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